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elizabeth

She brushed by,
Whilst I was sleeping
Upon my arm
I felt her straight cut blonde hair

Pitch black
And then
I heard her muffled speaking
I awoke

She was not there…

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Note:

This is my preferred version. I thought it may be useful to show something of the process. Showing a good synthesis of the strong elements of the previous versions, namely the sense of hair (line) and cut.